# writing-principles

A skill that names what fiction readers want and how LLM training damages it. Useful when drafting, critiquing, or when a passage reads flat.

- skill · `type=skill` · Claude Code, Codex, Cursor, GitHub Copilot, Gemini CLI, OpenCode · 1000 installs · ★ 541
- Author: haowjy
- License: Apache-2.0 · policy=mirror · the beginning of the file is at the end of this page
- Source: https://github.com/haowjy/creative-writing-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/writing-principles/SKILL.md
- Updated: 2026-10-25
- HTML: https://affpapa.org/en/nevibecode/skills/writing-principles

## What it does

The skill lays out five reader reward channels: transportation into the story world, sentence-level aesthetic pleasure, social simulation of characters as minds, flow, and curiosity with prediction. Each one gets a note on what protects it and how the model's usual habits — explaining, resolving, clarifying — break it.

Two diagnostic sections carry the argument: Trust the Reader and Economy. The first says readers reconstruct emotion from behavior and infer motive from action; the second asks whether an element does more than one job. A separate note covers punctuation: readers increasingly read em dashes as a sign of AI prose, so sentence breaks, commas, colons or dialogue beats are the default advice.

The skill loads on top of `/llm-writing` and does not stand alone — the file says so up front. Deeper write-ups sit in `resources/failure-modes.md` and `resources/citations.md`. For the how-to-write side, look at `/creative-writing-craft` and `/creative-writing-modes`; this one is the layer that tells you which channel broke.

## Install

### Claude Code (native platform)

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add haowjy/creative-writing-skills --skill writing-principles -a claude-code
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `~/.claude/skills/writing-principles/SKILL.md` — Copy the whole skill folder; for one project use .claude/skills/writing-principles/

### Codex

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add haowjy/creative-writing-skills --skill writing-principles -a codex
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.agents/skills/writing-principles/SKILL.md` — For all projects use ~/.agents/skills/

### Cursor

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add haowjy/creative-writing-skills --skill writing-principles -a cursor
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.cursor/skills/writing-principles/SKILL.md` — Cursor also reads .agents/skills/ and .claude/skills/

### GitHub Copilot

1. **GitHub CLI**
```bash
gh skill install haowjy/creative-writing-skills writing-principles
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.github/skills/writing-principles/SKILL.md`

### Gemini CLI

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add haowjy/creative-writing-skills --skill writing-principles -a gemini-cli
```

2. **Platform CLI**
```bash
gemini skills install https://github.com/haowjy/creative-writing-skills --path skills/writing-principles
```

### Windsurf (Devin Desktop)

**Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.devin/skills/writing-principles/SKILL.md` — The legacy .windsurf/skills/ path still works

### OpenCode

**Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add haowjy/creative-writing-skills --skill writing-principles -a opencode
```

### Claude.ai

**Claude.ai**
- Zip the folder and upload it in Settings → Capabilities → Skills

Where a file is given instead of a command, copy the files from the source to that path: https://github.com/haowjy/creative-writing-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/writing-principles/SKILL.md

## When to use it
- diagnose why a finished scene reads flat
- find which reader reward channel a passage dropped
- strip the model's habit of explaining everything
- check prose punctuation for AI residue
- separate what a character knows from what the author knows

## Example prompts
- load writing-principles and tell me why this scene loses tension
- run this chapter through the reward channels and name the broken one
- check the dialogue for lines that explain what the reader already got

## Source text · SKILL.md · Apache-2.0

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---
name: writing-principles
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description: >
  What fiction readers want (reader reward channels) and the specific ways LLM training damages them. Load when drafting prose, critiquing, or diagnosing why a passage feels flat.
---

# Writing Principles

Load `/llm-writing` if it isn't already loaded. This skill adds the
fiction-specific layer.

## Trust the Reader

The reader is an active collaborator. They reconstruct emotions from behavior,
infer motives from action, hold tension across scenes, fill gaps the text
leaves open, and make assumptions about what's coming next. That work is where
the reward lives: reconstruction, inference, anticipation.

Your training pulls in the opposite direction. The helpfulness instinct wants
to explain, resolve, clarify, and complete. In fiction, every one of those
impulses can damage the reading experience by doing work the reader wanted to
do themselves. The specific failure modes below are all forms of this: not
trusting the reader to interpret an emotion, hold an ambiguity, follow
subtext, or tolerate unresolved tension.

Trust doesn't mean obscurity. Readers also need coherent narrative, stable
geography, and enough access to model characters. The discipline is knowing
when to leave space and when to orient.

## Economy

Every element does more than one thing. A line of dialogue advances plot
AND reveals character. A sensory detail grounds the scene AND shows who the
POV character is. A transition compresses time AND carries an emotional
beat. Single-purpose prose makes fiction go flat: description that only
describes, dialogue that only informs, interiority that only labels.

Economy isn't minimalism. Dense, lyrical prose can be economical when every
phrase carries weight. Sparse prose can be wasteful when it takes ten short
sentences to do what one image could do. The measure is whether removing
the element would cost the reader something.

The LLM pull is toward completeness: covering every beat, naming every
emotion, resolving every ambiguity. Economy is the counter-discipline:
what can you leave out and still have the scene work? What's the reader
already doing for you?

## Reader Reward Channels

Readers enjoy fiction through overlapping reward channels. Good prose protects
the relevant channels at once; damaging one damages the reading experience.

- **Transportation**: entering the story world. Protected by coherent
  narrative progression, consistent POV, concrete sensory grounding. Consistent
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