# scott-adams

This skill helps trim prose, sharpen opening lines, and keep sentences short. Use it to revise writing with Scott Adams' business-writing method.

- skill · `type=skill` · Claude Code, Codex, Cursor, GitHub Copilot, Gemini CLI, OpenCode · ★ 53
- Author: surendranb
- License: MIT · policy=mirror · the beginning of the file is at the end of this page
- Source: https://github.com/surendranb/writing-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/scott-adams/SKILL.md
- Updated: 2026-09-02
- HTML: https://affpapa.org/en/nevibecode/skills/scott-adams

## What it does

The skill guides the agent through a pass on the text: open with a line that raises a question, remove words that add no meaning, shorten sentences, and put the actor before the action. It favors precise nouns and verbs over adverbs, and discourages sentences with nested clauses.

During review, the agent checks whether the opening creates interest, whether intensifiers and passive constructions can go, and whether each sentence carries one idea. It requires a standard Markdown parser and agent context. Without those, this review method has no stated basis for working.

## Install

### Claude Code (native platform)

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add surendranb/writing-skills --skill scott-adams -a claude-code
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `~/.claude/skills/scott-adams/SKILL.md` — Copy the whole skill folder; for one project use .claude/skills/scott-adams/

### Codex

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add surendranb/writing-skills --skill scott-adams -a codex
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.agents/skills/scott-adams/SKILL.md` — For all projects use ~/.agents/skills/

### Cursor

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add surendranb/writing-skills --skill scott-adams -a cursor
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.cursor/skills/scott-adams/SKILL.md` — Cursor also reads .agents/skills/ and .claude/skills/

### GitHub Copilot

1. **GitHub CLI**
```bash
gh skill install surendranb/writing-skills scott-adams
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.github/skills/scott-adams/SKILL.md`

### Gemini CLI

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add surendranb/writing-skills --skill scott-adams -a gemini-cli
```

2. **Platform CLI**
```bash
gemini skills install https://github.com/surendranb/writing-skills --path skills/scott-adams
```

### Windsurf (Devin Desktop)

**Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.devin/skills/scott-adams/SKILL.md` — The legacy .windsurf/skills/ path still works

### OpenCode

**Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add surendranb/writing-skills --skill scott-adams -a opencode
```

### Claude.ai

**Claude.ai**
- Zip the folder and upload it in Settings → Capabilities → Skills

Where a file is given instead of a command, copy the files from the source to that path: https://github.com/surendranb/writing-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/scott-adams/SKILL.md

## When to use it
- cut words that do not change a sentence's meaning
- split long sentences into single ideas
- replace vague verbs with precise ones
- write an opening that makes readers want the next sentence
- reorder sentences to put the actor before the action

## Example prompts
- Edit this passage with scott-adams: shorten the sentences and remove words that add no meaning.
- Rewrite the opening so it raises a question without giving away the answer.
- Find passive constructions and tangled sentences, then suggest direct rewrites.

## Source text · SKILL.md · MIT

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```text
---
name: scott-adams
description: Use when the user wants to simplify prose, prune extra words, craft high-curiosity opening hooks, write punchy short sentences, and structure ideas for maximum human brain comprehension based on Scott Adams' famous business writing method.
compatibility: Requires standard Markdown parser and agent context
---

# Scott Adams' Business Writing Method

Simplicity is persuasion. Prune unnecessary words, hook readers instantly, and write short sentences matched to how human brains process ideas.

## The core rule

**Simplicity equals persuasion. Cut extra words, write a high-curiosity opening hook, keep sentences short, and put the actor before the action.**

Workflow: `craft a high-curiosity hook` → `prune all filler and adverbs` → `write short sentences (one thought per sentence)` → `order subject before action`.

## Mechanics

1. **Prune extra words.** Delete filler words (e.g., "very", "really", "quite"). If removing a word doesn't change the meaning, delete it.
2. **Humor equals precise word choice.** Use specific, punchy verbs and nouns instead of generic verbs modified by adverbs (e.g., "swill" instead of "drink a lot").
3. **The curiosity hook.** The first sentence creates an information gap: the reader knows something valuable is coming but cannot see it, so they must read on to close the gap. Adams' own opener did this: "I went from being a bad writer to a good writer after taking a one-day course in 'business writing.'" (Which course? What did it teach?) Build the gap by promising a payoff, stating a surprising claim, or ending the sentence just before the answer. Adams rewrote that first sentence "a dozen times" until it made the reader curious. Test: if the reader can stop after sentence one, it is not a hook.
4. **One thought per sentence.** Keep sentences short. Never bundle multiple complex ideas into a single sentence. Readers comprehend simpler chunks faster.
5. **Actor before action.** Sequence sentences so the subject (actor) appears before the verb (action). Human brains process "the boy hit the ball" faster than "the ball was hit by the boy."
6. **No complex nesting.** Avoid subordinate clauses that delay the core subject-verb relationship.

## Verify

- First sentence opens an information gap — reader cannot stop after it
- Zero unnecessary filler words or intensifiers ("very", "really")
- Sentences average under 15 words and contain only one thought
- Subject precedes the verb in active, direct voice
- No complex or passive sentence constructions

## Do not

- Use passive voice ("was hit by") when active voice ("hit") works
- Pack multiple thoughts or dependent clauses into a single long sentence
- Rely on adverbs to add flavor when a stronger single noun or verb exists
- Settle for the first draft of an opening sentence

## Example transformations

**Before:** "It is very important to note that the team was quite successful in implementing the new features after they were thoroughly tested."

**After:** "The team shipped the new features."
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