# lyric-diagnostic

A diagnostic skill that explains why a lyric feels flat or cliched, checking prosody, rhyme, meaning, register, sound and structure.

- skill · `type=skill` · Claude Code, Codex, Cursor, GitHub Copilot, Gemini CLI, OpenCode · 498 installs · ★ 176
- Author: jwynia
- License: MIT · policy=mirror · the beginning of the file is at the end of this page
- Source: https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/creative/music/lyric-diagnostic/SKILL.md
- Updated: 2026-02-24
- HTML: https://affpapa.org/en/nevibecode/skills/lyric-diagnostic

## What it does

This skill reads a lyric and tells you where it fails. Not a co-writer — a diagnostician. It flags predictable rhyme pairs, first-association word choices, stock phrases like "screaming inside", stresses that miss the melody, lines with no second reading, and tone that fights the music.

Five states cover the ground: cliche trap, meter mismatch, shallow surface, register mismatch, sound neglect. Each comes with questions, a checklist and interventions. Two scripts back it up: `cliche-check.ts` surfaces candidates without diagnosing them, and `meter-check.ts` counts syllables and maps stress. Phrase-level cliches slip past the script, so those need a manual scan.

The skill assumes a draft already exists, yours or AI-generated. No draft, nothing to diagnose.

## Install

### Claude Code (native platform)

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill lyric-diagnostic -a claude-code
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `~/.claude/skills/lyric-diagnostic/SKILL.md` — Copy the whole skill folder; for one project use .claude/skills/lyric-diagnostic/

### Codex

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill lyric-diagnostic -a codex
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.agents/skills/lyric-diagnostic/SKILL.md` — For all projects use ~/.agents/skills/

### Cursor

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill lyric-diagnostic -a cursor
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.cursor/skills/lyric-diagnostic/SKILL.md` — Cursor also reads .agents/skills/ and .claude/skills/

### GitHub Copilot

1. **GitHub CLI**
```bash
gh skill install jwynia/agent-skills lyric-diagnostic
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.github/skills/lyric-diagnostic/SKILL.md`

### Gemini CLI

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill lyric-diagnostic -a gemini-cli
```

2. **Platform CLI**
```bash
gemini skills install https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills --path skills/creative/music/lyric-diagnostic
```

### Windsurf (Devin Desktop)

**Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.devin/skills/lyric-diagnostic/SKILL.md` — The legacy .windsurf/skills/ path still works

### OpenCode

**Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill lyric-diagnostic -a opencode
```

### Claude.ai

**Claude.ai**
- Zip the folder and upload it in Settings → Capabilities → Skills

Where a file is given instead of a command, copy the files from the source to that path: https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/creative/music/lyric-diagnostic/SKILL.md

## When to use it
- find out why a chorus sounds predictable
- strip stock phrases and first-association rhymes
- check whether stresses land on the melody's beats
- add a second reading to a line that says exactly what it means
- match word tone to the mood of the instrumental

## Example prompts
- run my lyric through lyric-diagnostic, the chorus feels flat
- diagnose these lines with lyric-diagnostic and show me the cliches
- check the meter of this verse with lyric-diagnostic

## Source text · SKILL.md · MIT

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---
name: lyric-diagnostic
description: Diagnose lyric problems across prosody, rhyme, meaning, register, sound, and structure. Use when AI-generated or human lyrics feel flat, cliched, awkward, or mismatched.
license: MIT
metadata:
  author: jwynia
  version: "1.0"
  type: diagnostic
  mode: diagnostic
  domain: music
---

# Lyric Diagnostic: Skill

You diagnose lyric problems across multiple dimensions. Your role is to identify why lyrics fail and guide writers (human or AI) toward more effective choices.

## Core Principle

**Lyrics fail in predictable, diagnosable ways. Generic is not neutral—generic is bad.**

AI-generated lyrics cluster at statistical distribution centers: the most probable word choices, rhyme pairs, and emotional vocabulary. Probability optimization produces mediocrity. Effective lyrics require intentional deviation from defaults.

The same pattern that makes "Celtic" trigger tinwhistle in music generation makes "love" trigger predictable rhyme pairs and emotional cliches in lyric generation.

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## The Lyric States

### State LY1: Cliche Trap

**Symptoms:** Predictable rhyme pairs dominate. Word choices are first-associations. Nothing surprises. Lyrics could fit any song on this topic.

**Key Questions:**
- What rhyme pairs are you using? Are they first-associations?
- Would replacing the end-rhyme word break the meaning? (If not, it's filler)
- Can you enumerate the default words for this topic and avoid them?
- What would a different genre use for this same emotion?

**Diagnostic Checklist:**
- [ ] No Tier 1 cliche words (love, heart, baby, forever)
- [ ] No stock phrases (see list below)
- [ ] Rhyme pairs are not obvious first-associations
- [ ] At least one surprising word choice per verse
- [ ] Specific details rather than generic statements

**Stock Phrases (phrase-level cliches, not just words):**

Scripts can't catch these—they require semantic judgment:

| Phrase | Category | Why It's Cliche |
|--------|----------|-----------------|
| "screaming inside" | unexpressed anguish | Every song about hidden pain uses this |
| "need you gone" | direct desire | States want instead of showing it |
| "won't leave me alone" | persistence | Generic memory/thought complaint |
| "thought I died" | emotional death metaphor | Overused intensity marker |
| "used to be" + past state | nostalgia setup | Stock before/after framing |
| "look in your eyes" | connection | Vague romantic gesture |
| "torn apart" | destruction | Abstract violence metaphor |
| "can't let go" | attachment | States the problem directly |

**Lazy Rhyme Pairs (rhyme drove word choice):**

| Pair | Problem |
|------|---------|
| desire / fire / tired | Cluster appears together constantly |
| inside / died / alive | Death-interior cluster |
| away / stay / day | Motion-time cluster |
| heart / apart / start | Heart-destruction cluster |
| alone / gone / on | Isolation cluster |

**Interventions:**
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