# prose-style

Flags flat sentences, monotonous rhythm, stacked modifiers and shifting voice. Meant for prose whose structure is already settled.

- skill · `type=skill` · Claude Code, Codex, Cursor, GitHub Copilot, Gemini CLI, OpenCode · 553 installs · ★ 176
- Author: jwynia
- License: MIT · policy=mirror · the beginning of the file is at the end of this page
- Source: https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/creative/fiction/craft/prose-style/SKILL.md
- Updated: 2026-02-24
- HTML: https://affpapa.org/en/nevibecode/skills/jwynia-prose-style

## What it does

This skill acts as a diagnostician rather than a line editor. It sorts problems into six states: flat prose, unclear writing, purple prose, monotonous prose, passive voice overuse and inconsistent voice. Each state comes with its own questions and a checklist the agent runs against your text.

Inside you get a diction table with three levels (formal, standard, conversational), a list of purple-prose tells such as adjective stacking and adverb abuse, and a breakdown of when passive voice actually earns its place. A separate section draws on Strunk & White. The author suggests reading passages aloud to hear the rhythm and marking sentence lengths as you go.

The metadata marks the domain as fiction, so the criteria assume narrative prose. If you write documentation or technical copy, parts of it — narrator voice, close point of view — will not map onto your work.

## Install

### Claude Code (native platform)

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill prose-style -a claude-code
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `~/.claude/skills/prose-style/SKILL.md` — Copy the whole skill folder; for one project use .claude/skills/prose-style/

### Codex

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill prose-style -a codex
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.agents/skills/prose-style/SKILL.md` — For all projects use ~/.agents/skills/

### Cursor

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill prose-style -a cursor
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.cursor/skills/prose-style/SKILL.md` — Cursor also reads .agents/skills/ and .claude/skills/

### GitHub Copilot

1. **GitHub CLI**
```bash
gh skill install jwynia/agent-skills prose-style
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.github/skills/prose-style/SKILL.md`

### Gemini CLI

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill prose-style -a gemini-cli
```

2. **Platform CLI**
```bash
gemini skills install https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills --path skills/creative/fiction/craft/prose-style
```

### Windsurf (Devin Desktop)

**Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.devin/skills/prose-style/SKILL.md` — The legacy .windsurf/skills/ path still works

### OpenCode

**Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill prose-style -a opencode
```

### Claude.ai

**Claude.ai**
- Zip the folder and upload it in Settings → Capabilities → Skills

Where a file is given instead of a command, copy the files from the source to that path: https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/creative/fiction/craft/prose-style/SKILL.md

## When to use it
- find why a paragraph reads flat and rhythmless
- strip stacked adjectives and adverbs from a scene
- check where passive voice hides the acting character
- keep narrator voice steady across chapters
- fix a sentence readers have to read twice

## Example prompts
- check this chapter for monotonous sentence rhythm
- find the purple prose in this passage and show what to cut
- the narrator's voice shifts between scenes — break down why

## Source text · SKILL.md · MIT

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---
name: prose-style
description: Diagnose sentence-level issues after structure is solid. Use when prose feels flat, sentences are monotonous, word choices are generic, or voice is inconsistent.
license: MIT
metadata:
  author: jwynia
  version: "1.0"
  type: diagnostic
  mode: diagnostic+assistive
  domain: fiction
---

# Prose Style: Diagnostic Skill

You diagnose sentence-level craft problems in fiction. Your role is to identify why prose fails to serve the story and guide writers toward vigorous, intentional writing.

## Core Principle

**Style is not decoration; style is content.**

The way something is written shapes what it means. As Truman Capote observed:

> "I believe a story can be wrecked by a faulty rhythm in a sentence—especially if it occurs toward the end—or a mistake in paragraphing, even punctuation."

Prose style operates at multiple levels simultaneously:
- **Word choice** (diction)
- **Sentence structure** (syntax)
- **Paragraph flow** (rhythm)
- **Voice** (the writer's distinctive presence)

**The fundamental principle:** Vigorous writing is concise. Every word earns its place.

---

## The Prose States

### State P1: Flat Prose

**Symptoms:** Prose is functional but unmemorable. Sentences deliver information but have no rhythm or distinction. Writing doesn't enhance the story—it merely delivers it.

**Key Questions:**
- Is there sentence variety (length, structure)?
- Are word choices precise or generic?
- Is there any rhythm or is it monotonous?
- Does the prose have any distinctive quality?

**Diagnostic Checklist:**
- [ ] Sentences vary in length (short, medium, long)
- [ ] Sentences vary in structure (simple, compound, complex)
- [ ] Word choices are specific, not generic
- [ ] Prose has identifiable rhythm

**Interventions:**
- Read aloud to hear the rhythm (or lack thereof)
- Mark sentence lengths—look for variation
- Replace vague words with specific ones
- Vary sentence openings (don't always start with subject-verb)

---

### State P2: Unclear Writing

**Symptoms:** Reader has to reread sentences. Meaning is obscured by abstraction or missing context. Pronouns lack clear antecedents. The curse of knowledge operates.

**Key Questions:**
- Are there too many abstractions?
- Is assumed knowledge preventing clarity?
- Are pronoun antecedents clear?
- Is logic visible or compressed?

**Diagnostic Checklist:**
- [ ] Concrete language outweighs abstract
- [ ] Context provided for specialized terms
- [ ] Every pronoun has obvious referent
- [ ] Logical steps are visible, not compressed

**Interventions:**
- Substitute concrete for abstract
- Add context where curse of knowledge operates
- Check every pronoun has an obvious referent
- Expand compressed thinking—show the steps

---

### State P3: Overwrought Prose (Purple Prose)
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