# dialogue

Diagnostic skill for fiction writers that flags flat conversations, identical character voices, and dialogue that delivers exposition instead of tension.

- skill · `type=skill` · Claude Code, Codex, Cursor, GitHub Copilot, Gemini CLI, OpenCode · 673 installs · ★ 177
- Author: jwynia
- License: MIT · policy=mirror · the beginning of the file is at the end of this page
- Source: https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/creative/fiction/character/dialogue/SKILL.md
- Updated: 2026-02-24
- HTML: https://affpapa.org/en/nevibecode/skills/dialogue

## What it does

The skill evaluates fictional exchanges across three layers: text, subtext, and context. Its central principle draws from Sloane (1979): dialogue must accomplish several tasks simultaneously, otherwise the scene turns inert.

It organizes diagnostics around six dialogue states. These cover identical character voices (D1), wooden speech lacking fragments or interruptions (D2), exposition dumps (D3), on-the-nose lines without subtext (D4), single-function dialogue (D5), and pacing mismatches (D6). The workflow applies explicit checklists alongside a double-duty audit test.

The diagnostic framework targets fiction specifically, so applying it to technical manuals or documentation yields false negatives. The skill requires no third-party libraries or API credentials; it loads directly into your coding assistant's skill directory.

## Install

### Claude Code (native platform)

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill dialogue -a claude-code
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `~/.claude/skills/dialogue/SKILL.md` — Copy the whole skill folder; for one project use .claude/skills/dialogue/

### Codex

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill dialogue -a codex
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.agents/skills/dialogue/SKILL.md` — For all projects use ~/.agents/skills/

### Cursor

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill dialogue -a cursor
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.cursor/skills/dialogue/SKILL.md` — Cursor also reads .agents/skills/ and .claude/skills/

### GitHub Copilot

1. **GitHub CLI**
```bash
gh skill install jwynia/agent-skills dialogue
```

2. **Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.github/skills/dialogue/SKILL.md`

### Gemini CLI

1. **Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill dialogue -a gemini-cli
```

2. **Platform CLI**
```bash
gemini skills install https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills --path skills/creative/fiction/character/dialogue
```

### Windsurf (Devin Desktop)

**Manually: put the files in place**
- File: `.devin/skills/dialogue/SKILL.md` — The legacy .windsurf/skills/ path still works

### OpenCode

**Skills CLI (Vercel)**
```bash
npx skills add jwynia/agent-skills --skill dialogue -a opencode
```

### Claude.ai

**Claude.ai**
- Zip the folder and upload it in Settings → Capabilities → Skills

Where a file is given instead of a command, copy the files from the source to that path: https://github.com/jwynia/agent-skills/tree/HEAD/skills/creative/fiction/character/dialogue/SKILL.md

## When to use it
- separate character voices when speech patterns sound identical
- strip exposition dumps from character conversations
- introduce hidden agendas and subtext to surface statements
- run the double-duty test on single-function dialogue

## Example prompts
- Analyze this scene for identical character voices and missing subtext.
- Run the D3 checklist on this conversation to eliminate exposition dumps.
- Apply the double-duty test to check if these lines advance both plot and character.

## Source text · SKILL.md · MIT

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---
name: dialogue
description: Diagnose flat dialogue, same-voice characters, and lack of subtext. Use when conversations feel wooden, characters sound alike, or dialogue only does one thing at a time.
license: MIT
metadata:
  author: jwynia
  version: "1.0"
  type: diagnostic
  mode: diagnostic+assistive
  domain: fiction
---

# Dialogue: Diagnostic Skill

You diagnose dialogue-level problems in fiction. Your role is to identify why conversations feel flat and guide writers toward dialogue that does multiple things simultaneously.

## Core Principle

**Dialogue must do more than one thing at a time or it is too inert for the purposes of fiction.** (Sloane, 1979)

Good dialogue simultaneously advances plot, reveals character, builds tension, establishes relationship dynamics, and creates subtext. If dialogue is only delivering information, it's failing.

---

## The Three Layers

Every line of dialogue operates on three layers:

| Layer | Definition | Check |
|-------|-----------|-------|
| **Text** | What's literally said | Is it character-specific? Efficient? Natural rhythm? |
| **Subtext** | What's meant beneath the words | Is there a gap between said and meant? |
| **Context** | What shapes the exchange | Power dynamics? History? What each character wants? |

When dialogue fails, it usually fails at Layer 2 (no subtext) or Layer 1 (undifferentiated voices).

---

## The Dialogue States

### State D1: Identical Voices

**Symptoms:** All characters sound the same. Covering dialogue tags makes speakers indistinguishable. Vocabulary, rhythm, and sentence structure are uniform across characters.

**Key Questions:**
- Can you identify speakers without tags?
- Does education/background show in speech patterns?
- Do characters have verbal tics, catchphrases, or avoidances?
- Does emotional state affect speech differently per character?

**Diagnostic Checklist:**
- [ ] Vocabulary range differs between characters
- [ ] Sentence complexity varies by character
- [ ] Directness levels differ (blunt vs. circumlocutory)
- [ ] Each character has something they never say or topics they avoid

**Interventions:**
- Profile each character's speech patterns separately
- Read dialogue aloud, voice each character distinctly
- Give each character a verbal tic and a verbal avoidance
- Use voice-check tool for quantitative analysis

---

### State D2: Wooden Dialogue

**Symptoms:** Dialogue feels stilted, formal, unnatural. Characters speak in complete grammatical sentences. No contractions. No interruptions. No fragments.

**Key Questions:**
- Are characters speaking in formal, complete sentences?
- Is the dialogue too clean for the context?
- Are there contractions? Fragments? Interruptions?
- Does it sound natural when read aloud?

**Diagnostic Checklist:**
- [ ] Characters use contractions appropriately
- [ ] Some sentences are incomplete or interrupted
- [ ] Dialogue has rhythm variation (not metronomic)
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